This is my first rough draft to my Unit 3 paper. I am writing my paper on the definition of "bro". My paper needs a lot of improvement. I had no idea where I wanted to go with this paper so I don’t think it flows well. I am also unsure about the last paragraph about the different categories of bros. I don’t know if it fits with the rest of my paper so I am thinking about taking it completely out or just using parts of it throughout the paper. I also need to work on my intro paragraph and thesis statement and I need to add a conclusion.
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