This is my final draft to my paper. I made some revisions from my second draft. I added some more personal experiences throughout the paper. I thought about writing an entire paragraph about my personal history and background with Barnes and Noble, but I could not figure out where to incorporate the paragraph into the paper. Instead I added my personal anecdotes randomly throughout the paper where I thought they would fit best. To further improve my second draft, I also added some transitional sentences at the beginning and endings of certain paragraphs where I found necessary. When I reread my paper, I realized that my transitions were not strong.
I learned so much about my writing skills when writing the multiple drafts of this paper. This assignment seemed very intimidating. At first, I was terrified at the thought of writing five to seven pages about a public space. I had no idea that I would be able to find so much in Barnes and Noble to write about. Barnes and Noble has so many details that I have never paid attention to. I found it very easy to find many things in Barnes and Noble to write about in my paper. Writing this paper and analyzing a space was a great learning experience because it is something I have never done before.
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