Tuesday, October 18, 2011
In class assignment, progress on paper
I have chosen to write my paper about the movie Mean Girls. I still have plenty of more work to do with the paper. I am still putting my thoughts together about exactly everything I want to include in my paper. I have plenty of ideas of topics to include in my paper but I need to put it in more organized form. I have an outline of my paper and I have an idea of where I want to go with my paper, but I need to structure it better. I have found multiple websites and reviews that I can potentially include in my paper. I just need to narrow down which reviews and other texts I am actually going to end up including in my paper. My biggest problem with my paper is trying to formulate my thesis statement. My first paper had a very weak thesis statement so I want to do a better job on my second paper. Hopefully the thesis statement no this paper will be much stronger and clearer than my first paper. I have written down a couple of thesis statement ideas so far but I will revise it many times to make it much stronger after I actually write my paper.
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