This is my final draft to my paper on Mean Girls. I made many revisions to my second rough draft. My rough draft for workshop 2 was incomplete so added a lot more since to this final paper from the last draft. I added more about the script of the movie and I added a conclusion paragraph. I rearranged my paragraphs so the paper would flow better. I also ended up reworking my thesis statement so it fit better with my paper. I created a different introduction paragraph because originally my introduction paragraph was a summary of the film. This new introduction paragraph relates more to the relevant pop culture of the movie. I also added my quotes from the outside references. I chose the movie poster and two movie reviews as my outside references. I am still unsure if I correctly incorporated quotes from the two movie reviews. On my last paper, my thesis statement and argument were not strong. I hope I have improved since my last paper and I hope my thesis statement and argument is much clearer on this paper. I enjoyed writing this paper much more than writing the Unit 1 paper on analyzing a space. Analyzing a movie was much more entertaining, especially since I wrote about one of my favorite movies. It was a lot easier to come up with ideas about the film to write about and analyze.
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