This is my second rough draft to the paper. I have made a lot of changes since my first rough draft and I have added some new parts. I still have so much more work to do on my paper. This rough draft is very incomplete. I have to finish the last paragraph I was working on in this rough draft and add a conclusion. I also need to incorporate my 2 other outside references. I have found the 2 sources I want to use but I am still figuring out where to incorporate it. I am planning on using a movie review from the New York Times and another review from filmcritic.com. I also need to work on my thesis statement still. In my thesis I mention the ridiculous behavior of the characters but I am not sure if I am going to actually do an entire paragraph dedicated to that part so I may need to redo my thesis statement.
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