Thursday, October 20, 2011

Out of Class, Authors Note to First Rough Draft, Unit 2


This is my first rough draft to my paper about Mean Girls. This is only the beginning part of my paper. I still have plenty of more to add to complete my paper. There is so much more about the movie Mean Girls that I can write about in this paper. I need to finish my paragraph about the stereotypical characters portrayed in the movie. I need to incorporate a section about the behavior and actions of the characters. I also need to write about the clever dialogue in the film. The script is what makes the movie so funny and I will find plenty of things in the dialogue that I could write about. I have written about the movie poster, but I still need to write about two other texts from the movie. I am thinking about using the movie review from the New York Times. I am still trying to decide with my third outside text would be. Once I am done writing my paper, I am going to revise my introduction paragraph and my thesis statement. My first paper did not have a strong thesis statement and the argument was not clear so I hope I do a better job on this paper.

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